Straight Line Project

So I've always wanted to do a greyscalegorilla challenge, and it seems I've never been successful at getting to an idea in time & executed it in a way I liked.
Sad to say, it happened again! Drat!
Been trying to learn C4D, but all of my ideas were far too rudimentary to post to the challenge.




SO, I decided to give up on that idea & try something new with what I was already acquainted with. Here's ONE trial, I still want to incorporate 3D somehow but not sure yet how.



Some sketches as well....


Still not sure what I'm going to make of it, but I feel like it could go somewhere.